Here, There Be Draugr

I've finished revising my November 2009 (yes, this past November) NaNo book and it feels pretty good. With help from my wife and my friend Mariah, I have found a number of inconsistencies and problem areas, not to mention typos and weird phrasings, and they have been fixed. At least, I hope they have been fixed.

I did a spell check and grammar check and investigated each one. I also did a search for draugrs and replaced them all with draugr. Because, after all, the plural of draugr is draugr, just like the plural of aircraft is aircraft.

I fixed the end and added a torch, but no salt. And I fixed the incantation to get into the lair.

I think it's a good draft. I'm sure there are other problems, but I'm all set right now to enter Amazon's Breakthrough Novel Award contest in just a half hour.